Where are you going?
I am not much of a future person, I really like what is happening to me right now, I don't like people around me asking about what's next in your life, I don't even like questions written in the board that make me think “hey man now what”. Maybe you think that's because everything is OK, off course not, is not OK at all. I have to work hard like everybody else, I have to feel that heavy weight in my body when I started my day at 4:00 o'clock in the morning. Off course is not OK. But is my life and I don't care if I have to support all the problems that I have right now. So I'm not going anywhere I'm gonna stay, I'm gonna fight, I'm gonna return each hit, I'm gonna pretend, I'm gonna feel, I'm gonna touch, I’m gonna create, I'm gonna watch and perceive. I just want to live.
Where have you been?
When I thought about it, it looks like if I would have been here forever. However I feel like if I would have lived different lives in the same place. They are divided by horrible moments There are too many thinks in my life that have occurred. Many of them really bad and I don't know why I don't remember the good times. I really wonder “were there good times?” Something inside me say “yes, there were”. Where have you been? I don't want to think I was in those horrible moments, just let me search in the middle of my black dust.
You know what Edward?? I guess you know how to transmit your feelings and emotions in your texts. You demonstrate it with this assignment. However, I guess you could check these passages:
ReplyDeleteis not OK = it´s not OK
But is my life = But it´s my life
Well, I would write it like this. If I´m wrong, please let me know it
Great to work a future writer like you