Thursday, 10 March 2011

The same story told twice almost three times by Jen

It didn´t have to happen, but it happened


“It's too late, the party is over,” my mother-in-law said and she turned the music off. “Aaaw,” the drunk guests, with empty bottles on their hands, said. Some minutes later they left the house.

My boyfriend's mom went to bed, she was tired, she wouldn't wake up until next morning… “Good news for us,” I thought and I drank my last cup of wine. It was the perfect opportunity to have a crazy night with my love.

I looked at him and he looked at me, then we laughed, we had the same idea… our emotions and our feelings together in one thought: “making love”.

“I love you,” he told me and these words were the ON button for my passionate kisses and my violent caresses. He took my clothes off desperately and so I did with his.
We made love like we had never done it before. It was a brutal sexual act.

When the intimate moment finished, our eyes were closed, we were burned out, and we fell asleep.

Dawn was breaking when my sister-in-law arrived. “I heard the lock opening sound” I said to my boyfriend, but he was as inert as a center park statute. I shook him twice, he finally woke up… it was late, his sister was coming. I took my clothes and he took his. We covered our bodies with a sheet. It wasn't enough, my thong was on the stairs. “Oops, sorry,” she said and left the living room.



Crazy night, unforgettable morning



There was no more music, there was no more liquor, there were no more people there
just you and me in that place at night.
you laughed because I laughed, we were drunk so we laughed.

There was not light but everything was right
you and me in a love battle, you with my skirt and my bra and me with your pants… our naked bodies on the carpet, shutting our minds off.

Your caresses and your kisses injected my skin
you know what arouse means?
So you know I couldn’t get out
you tattooed more than my mouth, more than my mind, you tattooed my life.


Time “stopped” for us, but it didn’t for others
morning arrived and your sister as well
clothes on the stairs, clothes on the sofa, and clothes on the floor
there was no time for hiding the truth: my underwear was under her foot.



Ooh-la-la


(No cha-cha-cha, no glug-glug.glug, no chit-chat…Yoooooooo! Yoooooooo!)


A & J: muak… uh-hu… muuak… mmm mmh…

A & J: ahh ha ha, ahh ha ha, mmh muaks

J: ooh, ooh, ooh… wow (…)

A: wooow… yeah (…)

(Tic toc tic toc, tic toc)

A & J: zzzz

(Tic toc tic toc, tic toc)

A & J:
Zzzz…

(Cock-a-doodle-doo)

J: Oh-oh… Aaah!

A: eh?

J: aaah!

A: huh? uh-oh

P: oh, oops! (Plop)

1 comment:

  1. i only stopped on cunjunctions and onomatopees version. it really expresses your idea, there's a funny surprise at the end. very clear, i saw it come, though

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