Thursday, 24 March 2011

the trip by Frank

My trip to maturity

It was a cool party night of emotion, excitement, alcohol, girls, dancing (but ended up being anything else hotter). As a matter of fact it became something like a turning point in my future. When I realized I was all bleeding, with my shirt tore up and riding my motorcycle I don't know how since I was drowned in alcohol. The fantastic thing was I got home completely unconscious, that was a miracle, a second called that I am still struggling to attend (Lord knows I’ve tried).How did it happen? It is morbid even to recall it. What were its unthinkable consequences? At least one is it made out me more aware of what one can lose if insist acting stupidly or what you can win if accepts guilt as a good adviser.

5 comments:

  1. It´s interesting the way you present your trip nevertheless, you could develop more your text by adding more details about it.

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  2. What did you like most about it?

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  3. The text is very short but is very impressive, personally I lived something similar in my life that was horrible.

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  5. well, what I liked most about it is that you are trying to reveal a kind of dark side, however I am pretty sure you are hiding something. So, go ahead, people are waiting for the missing parts.

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