Dear Ballet Teacher:
Even though it's been a while since I am not part of the ballet school,
I still feel like I need to let these feelings out.
I know you are used to these kind of complains
'cause I can bet I'm not the first none the last girl you blew her dreams away.
I can remember when I was 6 years old and my mommy got me into rhythmic gymnastics
just to be able to enter to Incolballet, letting aside the little kitchen play dates
with my girlfriends and going instead to practice every day for 3hours.
Then, when I was feeling like a winner because I was part of the future ballerinas
you started with your horror routines without considering I was ONLY 9 years old!!!!
You keep calling me and my friends FAT, LAZY and NO-GOOD-ENOUGH-TO-BE-THERE all the time!!!!
What the hell were you thinking?!!!!
I really wanted to become a ballerina!!!!!!!!!!
But you, with your nice tutu and shinning ballet shoes didn't care that much
about our dreams, did you??
Last week I watched the super heart-breaking movie "Black Swan" and it was obvious to me that I haven't got over this. I was following the music with my head and the routine with my hands, WTF? I felt like a crazy women doing that, come on! This happened decades ago.
And it was your entire fault. You wicked bitch.
Just for you to know (like you care) some of us were not brave enough and became anorexic or bulimic or both. Me I still keep this bitterness and frustration inside of me, waiting for the moment when the phrase "BREAK A LEG" becomes true for you and ruins your career forever.
Ha! How’s that?
Now I understood why you talk about your ballet teacher every class when we have to write a new text for Creative Writing, she really traumatized you.
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ReplyDeleteAnd I thought of you when watching The Black Swan. Hohoho, plus, you really involve your personal feelings about the bitch. Sorry, teacher. hehe.
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ReplyDeleteI think you really felt what you wrote 'cause you managed to transmit this huge anger you deeply and strongly have inside. I also enjoyed this text because your ballet teacher explains some things about the way you act.
My peer-review is just about punctuation marks; in some parts of this text I realized you used a comma instead of a point or a semicolon (line 21-22, L 26-27), you skiped a point (L 4-5), and you used parentheses between two commas (L 25).
Bye.
PS: you actually are lazy!
Thank U very much 4 all ur comments, and Johnny I know you love the way I am :D
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