SINGLE ENTRY:
It all started as a normal Friday: sunny, boring, and though the day was just beginning I knew it was going to be an exhausting long day. I dressed up neatly -more than I usually do- with black and dark shirt, jeans, and shoes. I took seventy thousand pesos to pay the ECAES -of which the deadline was that day at noon- and put them in my pocket. I left home feeling pretty down and arrived to the bus stop, where I got on the bus. All I can remember is that I did nothing more than listening to music. Then, when I finally got to the bank and filled out the deposit receipt, I walked towards the banker to realize that I had lost the money. All of it! I returned home just to find nothing. Later, my ex-boyfriend gave me a ride to work, but we were late. The next day, I packed my lunch and put some soda in a flask, just to notice two blocks away from home that the soda was dripping on my left shoe –which continued to happen on the MIO. Later, a few blocks away from work, I almost fall down there! I said, “Had I fallen here, I wouldn’t continue going to work…”
DOUBLE ENTRY:
It all started as a plain and normal Friday: sunny and bright, boring and dull, and though the day was just beginning I knew it was going to be a pale and exhausting long and endless day. I dressed up neatly and tidily -more than I usually do- with black and dark shirt, jeans, and shoes. I took and grabbed seventy thousand pesos to pay the ECAES -of which the deadline and closing day was that day at noon- and put them in my pocket. I went out and left home feeling pretty down and grim, got and arrived to the bus stop and got on it. All I can remember and recall is that I did nothing else and nothing more than listening to music and songs. Then, when I finally and at last got and made it to the bank and filled out and in the deposit receipt, I headed and walked towards the cashier and banker to find out and realize at the same time that I had lost and misplaced the money. All of it! I went back and returned home just to find nothing. Later and a few hours after that, my ex-boyfriend picked me up and gave me a ride to work, but we were late and tardy. The next day, in other words Saturday, I packed and prepared my lunch and some soda in a flask, just to feel and perceive two blocks away from home that the soda was spilling and dripping on my left shoe –which continued to happen on the MIO. Later, a few blocks away from work, I almost fall down and collapse there! I said and stated, “Had I fallen here, I wouldn’t continue and keep on going to work…”
This is soooooooooooo you, and for me it's even funnier 'cause I am a witness of that shitty day.
ReplyDeleteLoooooooooooove the double thing on the second/number two version... Great :D
I loved your double entry; it’s interesting how you use synonymous words and phrases for complementing your second version, the “synonyms game” injects an incredible force and energy to your story. Good job my Julian! Funny like you!
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