My trip to the infinite by Gustavo Maglioni
The first time I traveled to the infinite was pretty awesome. I was in Andres Islands and I was with my cousin and his school friends. We were a group of boys full of hormones wishing a lot of new things: sex, drugs, party and alcohol.
One of the six days we stayed there I was kind of bored because my cousin's friends didn't know anything about having fun. So I decided to breath fresh air and go outside the hotel. I said: Hey I'm going out now, I'll come back soon!
That night the sky was great. A big moon showing his white and beautiful round shape and a big number of stars dressing the black sky. I was happy because San Andres is a wonderful place, however, I needed something more in order to expand my expectations. I didn't know what was that thing that could do that, so I sat down on a chair next to the beach and a funny guy was there. He said: do you want a taste of this cigarette? I said: yes, sir. Holy shit, it was awful. Then He told me it was marihuana and each cigarette had a price of 3000 pesos. I said: ok give me two.
Later that night, the guys and I were in a big ship having a party with a lot of hot girls and I was drunk as hell. The party ended, I urinated on the beach and I took out my two cigarettes, I gave one to my cousin and we started to smoke that pot. I felt my head three times bigger and I felt as if I could fly, people were funny and I didn't understand anything. The sea was infinite, I was speechless. The alcohol and the THC were mix and I started to speak in a bad English and to drink more alcohol. I was traveling at the speed of light. I met Mr. Infinite himself. And since that I use to go visiting him every single week. ;)
You tried to detail the scenes of your story, that gives a sense of reality. I think it is a rather naïve story and it doesn’t get to a strong point. You should give more information about characters background and ages to see if they are as inexperienced as to see things that way.
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