My first trip alone was my first trip to my sexual life. Since I felt the engine of the bus, the wet kiss of my mom and I heard her words remembering me not to accept anything from strangers. I knew that that time I was going to be lucky with my cousin. I was fifteen and she was a well formed beautiful brunet, just fourteen, she was what we call in my country “una paisita”. Before my first trip alone to Medellin I had been there several times, and my cousin had been in Cali about two times; despite my attraction to her, and that dichotomy when you think somebody likes you but you are not sure, we had never been able to be alone, so I had never had the opportunity to ask her, this time, without my mom supervision that was going to be different.
After eight hours of traveling, and my buttocks like two pieces of marble I arrived to my aunt’s house. There she was radiant as always, with those beautiful eyes that always beat me when she looked staring at me. Those eyes talked by themselves they told me “Hi, cousin did you come alone?” I say hello to my aunt, but the only person that was there for me was her.
After four days of intensive talks and insinuations the time was running out as fast as my patience, the problem was my other cousin, his brother, my aunt and his husband used to work all day but my cousin, Carlos had the same schedule of her, so he used to be with us all the time. We had wonderful moments together, we played all kind of games, but my desire was stronger, due to the fact that I couldn’t stand him. Two days before my return to Cali My cousin woke up really sick, she had an awful flu, or in doctors words (she had an infectious disease caused by RNA viruses of the family Orthomyxoviridae). It was awful, her nose and throat were Mucuslandia. The good thing was that she didn’t go to school, so finally I had my chance. I spent like two hours thinking about my first move, meanwhile I heard the way she caught all the time, it was like December in the middle of June. Finally I went to her room, she looked worst than she sounded, then I made a usually stupid question.
- Hi, how are you?
- I’m awful. She answered.
- Can I do something for you?
- No, my mom already gave me a pill.
- Can I watch TV with you
- If you don’t care to be near.
Off course I didn’t care, a simple flu was not enough to forbid me to get what I want. I lay down close to her, I kind of embraced her and I started to touch softly her hair. She automatically got closer and we finished huddle. I didn’t have to say nothing. Ater ten minutes that for me were like a century, she started to kiss me, it was the most beautiful experience I had had in my life, after the kiss you all know what had happened. Since that day we are excellent friends and cousins between us there are just a great remember and I will always be thankful with her for that moment.
Definitively, you are a great writer!! But I guess you could include more details about the sexual moment that you experienced with your female cousin. I consider those kinds of details make your text more interesting than what it is.
ReplyDeleteDue to the lack of details, in terms of sexuality, the tittle of your text doesn’t reflect so much at all what is stated in it.
ReplyDeleteWell, it is just what I guess!!