Thursday, 14 April 2011

A trip to heaven - Xavier

A long time ago I had the most marvelous trip. I still keep it in my mind because that was a different experience. Something that changed my life. I remember that day when I took my red bag and went out to look for my destiny. I wanted to leave everything. I wanted to changed my surroundings, I just wanted to scape of the wrong way I lived.

The afternoon of the October 22th, I arrived to the Bus station without any idea of where could I go. I just walked around the halls. My mind was in white. People offered tikets to everywhere. I did not know where I wanted to go. I whished to get rid of all bad moments I had lived til these moment. Nevertheless I was still confused about my destiny.

While I thought about the shift of my iife, I could distinguish a beatiful face I had not seen long time ago. It was a friend of mine, She was Adriana. The last time I saw her was when we were in primary school, many years ago. She had moved to cartagena due to her father had to work there. We used to be real good friends. But I lost her at that time. Now I was sure we could restart our relationship.

Actually she realized I was sat down there and as she had seen the something very special, she looked at me and with the most beatiful samile, she told me. I really nice to see you! It was an amazing moment because we were talking about our lives for a long time.

When I told her what went on to me, she invited me to the place she went. It was an old farmer, where she used to go in her childhood. She had came to pass holidays there. so her favorite place was her grandparent's house.

As I was bored about my life, I accepted that invitation, I did not have anything to lose. We went with her and once again we where assamble. We passed the time sharing our success, our bad moments . We passed that moments as if they were the last in mi life. I do not her but in mi case, I felt as a child, rounded by nature, pure air, and the most I mportant, her company.

2 comments:

  1. it's a nice story but maybe talk about the reason why you were feeling so bad it would give us a better idea why you decided to do that trip.
    I think these sentences are not correct.
    I really nice to see you!
    where could I go
    that moments

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  2. This is a story very calm, maybe romantic. You follow a line and your reader can feel that he is travelling with you.
    You need to check the spelling of some words. And you can include some metaphors in order to explain your feelings .

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