OPEN LETTER TO MY HOMEWORK BY ROSA DORIS HUERTAS
“Sometimes my homework is small
Sometimes my homework is long
But whenever i do my homework
My homework is always wrong”
Faiz Khan
Sometimes is too much homework for a day, sometimes I fell myself like “NO MORE”, and I wonder where could you please leave me alone, but then I think, something we do not like but are necessary, but why you are so necessary to me?, why you always me?, you can life me alone just one day, you are as a parasite, you always be there. “Rosa do this”, “Rosa do that”.
Wherever I am you follow me, is like a pursuit. I hate for example when the teachers invoke sentences like: for the next class, next Monday bring, complete for the next day. The worst thing is that sometimes appear under the outfit of small or large activities that at the end shall remain the same.
I would ask you a favor, could you give me please a holiday free, because I almost always ruin my weekends. But you know it's funny, I am also those one who invoked you. The truth is that I am not so sure if I do this just to fill a gap in class, because at the end, I got no enough time tocheck you, at the end, whether if I have to make you or qualify you I am forced to stay up lateand never by anything or anybody I do what I do for you, I finish sacrificing for you my onlybreak, my family, myself, and I often wonder how healthy is this relationship, how much benefityou bring me, just a score? Will I always learn something? Ok. I am not going to be so rude, yes, maybe sometimes I learned, but It does not always happened.
Well, we both agree in our disgust to those unbearable teachers' inventions.
ReplyDeleteAt the beginning I could feel your disatisfaction, and hard feelings against tasks, but at the end your led your anger towards teachers or yourself. Obviously homeworks exist thanks to teachers but in this I would like to read more development of the main idea of considering assignments repugnant.
Switching to grammar you give the text a closer revision, I found some things to correct.
The mere idea is pretty interesting and you should develop it deeper.
THANKS COULD YOU PLEASE HELP ME WITH THE GRAMMAR BECAUSE I AM VERY BAD AT THAT
ReplyDeleteIt is a good topic. Many times i have made those homeworks because i have to...but not in all the cases.....there are some homeworks i enjoy and i felt i learnt. i think it would be better if we coud chose to do just those homeworks we find very and helpful and enjoyable for our major.
ReplyDeletewell i liked your text because as you see it makes me to reflect and i share with you some things.....there many things to talk about it.